I thought the last few lines were adorable actually. And they weren't ridiculously lovey-dovey or anything - very much in love, sure, but that's not such a bad thing. I feel like the inclusion of the previous details about their relationship was a good move because (aside from just being hilarious, which it was, totally) that paragraph also just has little hints of seriousness, which really helped to keep it from getting too mushy. If that makes sense (I suspect it doesn't). And even if you don't have any inspiration to write more about them, well, this is an AWESOME fic so it's quite good enough to stand alone.
Eh, class was class. A bit dull, not too bad. Having this to look forward to sure made it go by faster, though! ^_^
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Date: 2009-02-13 09:46 pm (UTC)Eh, class was class. A bit dull, not too bad. Having this to look forward to sure made it go by faster, though! ^_^