shinealightonme: (cm three for one)
shinealightonme ([personal profile] shinealightonme) wrote in [personal profile] batgurl88 2009-10-31 05:33 pm (UTC)

Hee! This was great. Morgan's line at the end has me grinning, but throughout most of the story I was feeling quite on edge. Very good job at building up the suspense...I think the creepiest bit might have been Emily and the piano because it was the little details that were so creepy (noticing that the indent on the bench had disappeared).

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